FADE AWAY
Why was there a poster in his room
that said FADE AWAY?
It’s been around
since forever
now that he thought about it
And until today
there was no reason
to even think about it
Life was happening fast
It happened so fast
that it’s been 52 years
since the day he was born
Today there was nothing left to do
but observe the poster
that said FADE AWAY
And there was nothing else to do
not because he’d done it all
but because he hadn’t done shit
52 years and nothing done
Nothing worthwhile anyway
But values change, man
Oh, how they change
One day you’re young
thinking failure and shame
and ridicule are what suck
Well, you’re not wrong
But
Later when you’re old
you realize nothing sucks more
than never risking these things
when you were young
Now this
So now you either tell yourself
that it is never too late to be
what you might’ve been
Or you sit alone
in your silent room
with no wife
and no kids
no pets
and a pension
that comes once a month
And slowly blink your eyes
at your poster that says
FADE AWAY
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A skillfully penned poem that echoes the universal theme of aging and the internal turmoil that comes from the realization you did not live your life to it’s fullest. Absolutely loved the way you began the poem with a rhetorical question “Why was there a poster in his room/that said FADE AWAY?” I think it sets the tone of what’s to come rather nicely.
And what came after is a beautiful weaving together of exaggeration, repetition, and imagery. For me, the highlight comes towards the conclusion, after you’ve realized you haven’t done shit, there’s a duality in the narratives we tell ourselves. For some, they will find solace in every moment, and make the most of what’s left of their lives, and for other’s, death may be a wish we want to take away the sorrow of loneliness and past regrets.
All in all, it was a touching and thought-provoking read. Glad I stumbled upon it. Thanks Bogdan.
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(っ╹◡╹)っ I thank you very much for reading it, Lazarus!
Much appreciated! 🙂
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Heart-breaking to think that this is how many end up. Stark reality, well-written, Bogdan.
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Thanks for checking it out!
Much appreciated! 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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