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late autumn cold enough to turn a breath visible he leaned against the rail of the bridge and watched the river run below him and imagined he was in a spaceship hovering above the land Smiling he said, "Yes, I'll be there one day, brother. I'll pick you up with the spaceship we wanted to build together. I'll put it together and then–" and just then a pair of hands grabbed him from behind and pulled him apart from the rail. "All right now," said the nurse, "let's not get carried away again." He startled. "I wasn't going to jump this time. I swear." "I believe you," said the nurse. "But let's just leave now. Let's get back. I'm cold and I'm sure you're hungry too and we could get a cup of hot chocolate. How about it?" "I wasn't going to jump," he said. She held his hand. "I know. I know, dear. Come now. Let's get back." "I wasn't going to jump." She dragged him away from the rail and held his hand all the way back to what she called the friendly house.

Very nice poetry reading about a sad yet beautiful moment in life. Bravo
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Thank you very much for reading / listening 🙂
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Very good Bogdan enjoyed reading that
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Thank you!
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I enjoyed listening to this poem, Bogdan. I liked the dreamy beginning and the back-to-reality ending. 👍❤️✍️
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(✿◠‿◠) Thank you very much, Carolyn!
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Heart aches, Bogdan.
Gwen.
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(.づ◡﹏◡)づ.
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Gwen
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It’s an emoticon that reaches for a hug :)))
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I enjoyed the verbal poetry. Thank you for sharing.
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ʕっ• ᴥ • ʔっ I thank you for checking it out!
Much appreciated! 🙂
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You are welcome my friend.
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Well, that’s clever! And as my clever grandchildren often say ‘ Back at you!’Gwen.
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Haha, fantastic 👏 Gotta love a friendly house
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(っ╹◡╹)っ Thank you!
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This is really well written, you’ve presented the emotion in a very subtle way!
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Thank you for checking it out! ⊂(´・◡・⊂ )∘˚˳°
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So well written!
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Thank you, Bob! (´,,•ω•,,`)
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Nice
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Thank you! (^_^)
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Oh yeah—my Dad worked as a Protestant Chaplain in one of those—a whole campus-worth with many buildings and at one time its own food service, laundry and safety departments—for nearly 30 years Friendly House, indeed! 😀 I wish we still had them, for the safety of the patients!
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